1.https://www.youtube.com/watchv=jJfZb8rAUGQhp4t
2&3. The feedback I received was primarily about bringing up the energy from past videos. To do that, I altered my script a bit to include some parts that I can be more enthusiastic. Another thing was to include a few more details about the product which I also revised and included in the script. All the feedback I received made a lot of sense so I carried out the necessary actions.
Mohammed, I found your elevator really interesting and the changes that you made really did impact your pitch. I like the fact that you took the constructive feedback into consideration in order to take the next steps in improving your product. Your energy was great, I was really pulled in, and it left me wanting to hear more. Great job.
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